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Wednesday 20 February 2013

Friend ship poem


FRIENDSHIP

L.I. - Look at descriptive language used in poetry
Look at writing with the senses
Use a model to create our own versions of a poem

Friendship tastes like sweet colourful lollies on a plate.

Friendship smells like lovely beautiful flowers falling from a green tree.

Friendship looks like sparkling shining stars twinkling in the dark shadowy sky.

Sammy Fu

Look at the poem and highlight the sense words blue
Highlight the adjectives yellow
Highlight the verbs pink

Friendship

Friendships smells like popcorn, shared with your friends in a dark movie theatre.

Friendship sounds like people chewing bubble gum.

Friendship feels like me and my friend doing our handshake.

Friendship looks like snappers flying through a river.

Friendship taste like me eating my favourite cheese cake.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Mosese

    You have got a very interesting poem and the way you used one poem then took all the key words and made your own friendship poem was great and hope your posts get better and better every time ''KEEP IT UP''

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